All Comments on 'dharma drunk and desperate'

by steve porter

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SeattleRainSeattleRainalmost 20 years ago
scare scar here thar'

I had to force myself to read the poems in order today I wanted so badly to read this!

"as you lay shivering and wet

scared on the face of matterhorn

that you could not quite climb."

I read this scarred on the face and loved it

but scared is right on

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
excellent...

...as usual, steve. so many lines here that stir. great reading.

flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
Great poem, blah blah blah

I love "you were your own ghost/and free..." An excellent existentialist work. I'm tired of Steve writing so damn many great poems!

kinky shy girlkinky shy girlalmost 20 years ago
that's such a great line

"dharma drunk and desperate" - I have a feeling that phrase will be stuck in my head all day. Damn, that's good!

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
very nice!

alotta great lines in this poem.

i liked it! cheers!

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
I thought I commented on this

but it must have been another poem. Oh well. I like it and I knew I would.

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