All Comments on 'diet'

by ElmerGlew

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AngelineAngelineover 16 years ago
Succinct and Clever!

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 16 years ago
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Fattening you may be but this is a dish to savour!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hearty Meal

Marrinated heart and a full bodied red wine make the perfect combination. Excellent!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Not quite appetizing

"i'm fattening"?

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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There are those risks, of putting oneself 'out there'.

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 16 years ago
^

Perhaps you need to find someone who is not on a diet.

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