by ghost_girl
is the only word I can use to describe this. I love the imagery you've used here. The lines:
'I fuck you with fingers and trowel
drench your face with cloud spit'
are going to stick in my mind today. Simply brilliant.
Mentioned in todays new poem reviews
that are very effective. The poem seems a little ambivalent about your feelings towards both sex and gardening. The adoption of a male persona is interesting.