All Comments on 'Dirty Dreams'

by BabyBlue2005

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KillerRomanceKillerRomanceover 15 years ago
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'Morning takes over with blushing lies.' I liked that very last line. It brings out how most people feel in the mornings after falling into bed without thinking of the consequences. <3 Lillian, KR.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 15 years ago
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Thats how I saw the whole poem and someone turned up the brightness. Well done.

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