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IraniaIraniaover 14 years ago
Tough love

I enjoyed two of the lines immensely.

"Or have you pissed

on me - so true love stinks again of you?" Good comparison.

"Romance: a cratered clearing: pockmark the vile

terrain where idylls crawl to hibernate," This is harsh and moving.

Nice visuals.

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I enjoy caring relationships with quiet, polite, women with open minds and good senses of humour, be it in a longer-term arrangement or just a one off. If you are up for it, I will engage in daddy-ply, d/s play, impact play and other sensual games. Definitely not into hurti...