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Click hereMy Mistress sailed away from me across an angry sea,
Each night I sit upon the rocks and watch her back to me,
Hard by these heartless breakers, on this gulf I will abide,
Until red sails at dawn return my Mistress to my side.
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YDDalmost 20 years agoDistant
Sometimes four lines are all one needs.
In line two have you considered a verb other than "watch",
perhaps something like "wish"?
My Erotic Tailalmost 20 years agoShort and sweet~
Nice lil poetic play, and heartfelt warmth of words. Nice.
