All Comments on 'Distant'

Nice lil poetic play, and heartfelt warmth of words. Nice.

you said what you meant, n 4 lines flat, you did it well :)

Sometimes four lines are all one needs.

In line two have you considered a verb other than "watch",

perhaps something like "wish"?

Kinda reminds me of, "My Bonnie ... over the ocean... "

Cute.

:-)