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by RhymeFairy

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bigntenderbigntenderabout 18 years ago
Raw emotion

Raw emotion about a father who isn't there. isn't doing the right thing. isn't stepping up to be a father. it happens way too often and has devesatating effects.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
Deep

from the depths of the soul, where so few go, a call from the bellows of emotions came a gripping write. (~_~)you are the rock, he is the rain.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
such a fine pen..

so different from your norm...a bit of view into the harsh world ..which I can relate to...cold hearted orbs...now past..future warmed by the heart of our today...lights fade ..tides turn..past burned....twas yesterday....nice to see this side of your work...*****blue*****

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 18 years ago
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A hard write here

Of emotional bruising ~

at least;

Hope it proves to be cathartic

And brings many brighter days...

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