All Comments on 'Dream Bed'

by oneiria

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
arranged this way

Oh, to lie upon the silk waterfall of your hair,

your inner walls shielding me from the icy air,

my limbs upon your limbs, our fingers intertwined,

our souls repaired. Looks a little bare.

you can get away with this format, with the contrasting thought

didn't vote

demure101demure101over 11 years ago
But then,

emaotions can be a little bare, cut down to their essentials.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
1ST CUM....1ST SERVED

and we shall so remain, TK U MLJ LV NV

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