All Comments on 'drinking down the harvest'

by SeattleRain

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lipsticksunset1984lipsticksunset1984almost 20 years ago
This....

...is hot! I was with you all the way here, girl...word for word!

SeattleRainSeattleRainalmost 20 years agoAuthor
tasting the mirror

hey hot lips, glad you were there with me, it is not a good place to go all alone...

damn I read this and it made me hot all over again, damn will it never end? This psycho sexual narcism? Keep reaching down to that still water, but touching it just you know, makes it all disappear sigh. :)

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
If

you two get a room I want in.

powerful piece seattle

sexual and raw and a power struggle.

i love that animal inside

Thank you

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
purrrrrfect!!!

lol, i chuckled out loud at this..

damn this made me throb with anticipation.

i absolutely loved this..i'm still grinning!!

nice nice nice!!!

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
ps

"clenched teeth growl

motherfucker justdoit do it!"

haha..exactly as i would have put it!!

sorry for the double post but it was worth a second read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Have mercy

time to spontaneous combust

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
slut, whore, bitch

in a poem is usually a good thing. How about in feedback?

S.R., you slut, whore, bitch, I like your poem. :) lol

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 20 years ago
One small fault

in this "open earth pulsing to life"

motherfucker justdoit do it! really should be:

motherfucker justdo it do it! doit sounds like, well d oi t.

I really must be getting ooold, to HAVE noticed that!

voyergirlvoyergirlover 19 years ago
loved it right to the end

am i your slut, whore, bitch?

lmao, perfect capture of a moment in the tormented mind of a pet.

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