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assignment #1
drinking down the harvest:
thighs quiver in the erratic rhythm
of a marathon-exhausted body needing water,
salts, and a sharp focus finish line
instead given only a smile up from down between,
this sweat dripped head peering over
belly up between breasts
bringing her to the edge,
his slick smile pauses the gnaw and grind
for words awaiting answers
breath and beg parched lips
whisper, "please"
"beg your pardon?"
this bears repeating,
louder this time
like you mean it
only you know what promises will be made,
conditions accepted, what labels will be confessed,
today am I your slut, whore, bitch?
what wishes completed
for this gift of satisfaction
check off pre-paid list of naughty nice
demands of self pinch and insertion,
spit clean the tools of tough love pleasure
fingers placed flat between
while the other hand smacks them down
buffered swat on the right spot
each with another smile, another moan
another pause, teeth on knees
looking down at tears
suddenly turning to crazed eye
clenched teeth growl
motherfucker justdoit do it!
finally the give in,
the lay down chin circular pressure,
resurrection lift, roll away the stone
for this re-hydration of Spring,
bringing the open earth pulsing to life
before eyes, into mouth
drinking down the harvest.
...
am i your slut, whore, bitch?
lmao, perfect capture of a moment in the tormented mind of a pet.
in this "open earth pulsing to life"
motherfucker justdoit do it! really should be:
motherfucker justdo it do it! doit sounds like, well d oi t.
I really must be getting ooold, to HAVE noticed that!
in a poem is usually a good thing. How about in feedback?
S.R., you slut, whore, bitch, I like your poem. :) lol
"clenched teeth growl
motherfucker justdoit do it!"
haha..exactly as i would have put it!!
sorry for the double post but it was worth a second read!
lol, i chuckled out loud at this..
damn this made me throb with anticipation.
i absolutely loved this..i'm still grinning!!
nice nice nice!!!
you two get a room I want in.
powerful piece seattle
sexual and raw and a power struggle.
i love that animal inside
Thank you
hey hot lips, glad you were there with me, it is not a good place to go all alone...
damn I read this and it made me hot all over again, damn will it never end? This psycho sexual narcism? Keep reaching down to that still water, but touching it just you know, makes it all disappear sigh. :)
...is hot! I was with you all the way here, girl...word for word!