All Comments on 'Dry'

frustration sucks, hard.

poem. I think some of the punctuation with the extra commas caused me to stumble a little. I REALLY liked how you ended your work here "another day passes". Take a deep sigh.

I felt this poem.. that is so good!!! Painfully my skin swims in the frustration of this visual and sensual write!

I feel the passion and that is what I look for.. this is great!

du lac

mmmm, tasty unfulfillment....