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fridayamfridayamalmost 14 years ago
I have read this

several times, and I think I see your argument. But it is dense, knotty and difficult--and those are not meant to be critical words. I'm not sure some of your punctuation helps--particularly the comma at the end of L6. But I enjoyed the stretch it gave my brain. Thank you.

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