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All Comments on 'Dusk At Dawn'

by DawnJ

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerabout 10 years ago

Very nice. The sparse words suggest more than what is written. I began thinking about the cycle of life.

Oldbear63Oldbear63about 10 years ago
Really nice

Dawn - i could see it and thought it was beautiful. Read then read it again very slowly with my mind more focused. Really enjoyed this

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 10 years ago
There's a Mystical connect between the twins :

Dusk & Dawn !

tazz317tazz317about 10 years ago
MAKES ONE WONDER ABOUT THE TWINS

1 IS BLACK AND WHITE THE OTHER IS WHITE AND BLACK AS YOU FACE THEM. tk u mlj lv nv

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