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minsueminsuealmost 18 years ago
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"or do you enjoy the flat saccharin after taste

of yesterday's delirious

i-think-i'm-in-love-with-you lies?"

Good line!

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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