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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
A touching poem...

but a number of grammatical and spelling problems detract from the overall affect. On the first line "meet" wants to be "met", "destine" wants to be either "destined" or "destiny" depending upon where you are going with it.

You might want to edit the poem and resubmit...

jim : )

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