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by MikeIvy

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
One tip

probably a good idea, esp since this is the first line:

Orderly yet random

If you introduce a contrast, another one is in order somewhere, especially at a place of some importance.

Just a thought, Mike, A5

softsmilesoftsmileabout 13 years ago
Lovely

With a heart that sees the magic of nature, you walk us into spring with such awareness... I get the feeling there is very little that goes unnoticed when you are walking in your woods. Thank you for taking us with you. :)

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