All Comments on 'Echoes of my Father'

Beautifully written.

Watch what you do and what you say,

your antics will be borne

by you kids for decades yet to come

a nice thoughtful piece

Unfortunately I can relate all too well. thanks for putting this on paper.

and terror come through perfectly.

as someone else said

powerful piece.

Thank you

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