All Comments on 'Edge of the Day'

Warm and tingly! ~Imp

a pearl of a poem~

excellence excelled in Du Lac's wit

love the transition~

I like the theme of waking up. The meter that you start with falls apart occassionally, for example,

Dreams of the night,

Fly to the day,

Alive and breathing,

Passion’s creative way.

The first two lines have the expected meter but not the last two. From the content, I don't see why the meter needed to change.