All Comments on 'Effortlessly...'

there are no comments on your work. It;s a shame and a loss to everyone who enjoys poetry.

This is another excellent piece but you do not need the ellipses. A period would suffice and in the case of the second strophe, it weakens it. The second strophe is my favorite but all of them are strong. You have such a talent, I loved your site and am glad to see that your poetry and art is not languishing here, waiting for someone to accidentally discover it.

our lithesome figures err in their favor. TK U MLJ LV NV