All Comments on 'Elicit Endeavors'

Really, not a bad poem at all but certain word and phrase choices weaken it: "I have your key to hide and seek. I shall find your button/silken tongue glued to your button of thriving need." Yesterday, Angeline's review mentioned your other poem and the use of "lil." I agree that some words just don't work and they can detract from a poem.

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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