All Comments on 'embracing you'

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

a much more mature poem than you would have written 3 months ago.

the work is paying off

: )

Keep it up

i see that finally is spelt wrong!

i'll trim some back..well i'll try..lol

for as a poet trims his words, his voice begins to be heard. There's something wonderful here, just waiting for you to free it.

but I didn't really get into until the fifth stanza that starts with necklines wet with salty raindrops. It's a good poem. Each poem of yours is getting better and better.

*No longer using the thermometer.