All Comments on 'Emoceans'

I can see you went deep for this one. Heartfelt and rememberable. I love the flow, your word choice and your turns in the basement of thought. Very nice pen here chalked full of things that go bump in the night. Whether mindful or thoughtless I love this one.(Not saying you are thoughtless, just I love the quirky turns in thought here )

You have my 5 ~!!!

some wonderful phrasing here, potent images-- the faulty caulking (wow what a word combo!) and suncrystals...

lovely write, thank you-

~annaswirls

...with the previous comments. Great imagery.

Tess

enjoin your rite

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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reading these verses fit like a glove

for a moment. at least, i could feel the love

eight minutes have past since the sun has set

reading these lines, i feel we've just met