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and 2 syllables each to the 2nd and 3rd line to make it into a haiku.

Voilà: Your inbox is empty no more.

anonymously curiousflower. My inbox could do with filling...

I'm just acuriousflower, you know...

As if you ever have an empty inbox ;)

inbox is empty too

My outbox has gone South ... Or to sleep zzzzzzz

...and it calls to me.

five pages (in A Telephone Call) to say roughly the same.

these eight words do as well! :)

was mentioned in the new poems listing for yesterday. Congratulations on making a splash with your first poem: "Scotsman69, prolific Lit story author, posts his first poem: "Empty". Aphoristic, and only eight words, so I'll just let you read it yourself.

I liked it.

of closure or facts. TK U MLJ LV NV