All Comments on 'Enduring Love'

I'm really enjoying

your poetry,

more plezz!

Thanks.

~ Jenn

of which i come to focus on the last three lines:

she gets on her knees

when he starts to squeeze

she pretends it’s a hug

the first line is all about the proposal. the next two lines seem to me to imply a burden. that is my take of this particular spot of the poem. the ending doesn't punch me, it hangs in me. nicely done.....don