All Comments on 'Envy'

and effective

A nice image but young grass is short tall grass is old.

Lovely little snippet describing a peaceful scene ~ growing grass. Pleasant.

Excellent sparse piece with vivid imagery as it sensuously rolls through the mind.

Excellent imagery and metaphor. You've crafted this well enough to make me think about it time and time again. I like it when a poem does that.

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