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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Not quite as subtle as your first one

But it's vivid nonetheless.

sajaxomsajaxomover 17 years ago
From such lips...

Beautifully written. I am usually not one for such overt language, but the flow and climax of your poem are excellent. I enjoyed it immensely.

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