All Comments on 'Erotic Villanelle #2'

Anyone who dares to write "of desire's rosen flush gainst linens pale" has got balls. Tongue in cheek I pray?

Got the form down pat, but you knew that already; even able to show some wit about it, toward the poem's end. Really done well, comes across so smoothly, it presents itself as an effortless write {A villanelle? Effortless? Right.}

Tangled Sheets ~ a tell-tale sign of erotic pleasure.