All Comments on 'Eternal Lust'

by Miss Oatlash

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sandspikesandspikeover 19 years ago
Romantic too....

Wet and romantic is a great combo. Thanks for a good one.

Great last line or two.

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
A short, sweet read.

But I must admit that my most satisfying read of this poem was when I ignored the last line. When I did, there was a pleasant, resonating hope in that quiet command/request.

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Touching

A sweet, touching poem for a lover. In all the right ways. Well done, Miss O!

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