All Comments on 'Evening Hillside'

I love how you brought the olympic spirit into this!

Some great images here, Remec. I could suggest some words that could be cut to leave the poem feeling more distilled and tight, but it is good as it stands :)

Thanks for playing!

no thermo

I liked it Remec, it was good, Lisa.

Wanna mow my lawns?

LOL good stuff hon!! ;-)

in time for the moon dance.

lovely!

nice work!

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