All Comments on 'Evensong'

doesn't matter, this is a great opening

is it her intent

to demand such attention

with her still, silent beauty?

Followed with a great rest of it, even the plum smoke

The words paint a lovely lavendar picture. Breathtaking!

a beautiful picture that leaves me wanting more.

Thank you

.....this is brilliant. The finish, the start...all of it.

...captured images. truly a powerful piece.

With your words

She can be seen standing

Serene, demanding by her pose

Attention; all else disappears

As she continues to drive the world.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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