All Comments on 'ex sighs'

tightly interwoven... hard to have one without the other. great job, impster. you know i love your schtuff. time for another, please.

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I marvel at your ability to capture the 'completeness' of a complicated set of emotions, and express it simply, yet with such rich imagery. Very well done. I share the sighs, sweets, and the wish to ease the pain. Thank you. LJ

Your poetry is like a hand that reaches in and grabs at my inner being. You words always touch me. Great job, Imp

~Honey

...make for such beauty? Because we have to get this out of us before it eats our hearts to dwindled nubs that fetally quiver when touched...pity those who can't let it out. I do.

is the best...not that the others sucked but the sheer symplicity captures the bigger picture.

I didn't have the heart to bomb it...it's too good.

I'll wait to bomb your next story before the other trolls do.

that one hit me hard!

It's amazing how much

beauty can come from

so much pain.

Great work,

thanks.

~ J

of both pain and poetry were expressed here. Imp, you have a way with your words that cut straight down to the marrow of the bone before we realize we're bleeding! As per your usual, an emotionally wretching piece flowed from your pen. Superb job! <smile>

Vixxx

I loved it . . . nicely done.

Seems like it has all been said, it's like the pain of losing a child thats what I think of when Iread this

Thanks

The second strophe-- especially hard-hitting.

brutally excellent. all else has been covered........nicely done......don

...like this doesn't sigh, it screams. In the right hands those screams are fuel for art. Apparently your hands are the right hands. A very powerful write.

ty,bd