ex sighs

...like this doesn't sigh, it screams. In the right hands those screams are fuel for art. Apparently your hands are the right hands. A very powerful write.

ty,bd

brutally excellent. all else has been covered........nicely done......don

The second strophe-- especially hard-hitting.

Seems like it has all been said, it's like the pain of losing a child thats what I think of when Iread this

Thanks

I loved it . . . nicely done.

of both pain and poetry were expressed here. Imp, you have a way with your words that cut straight down to the marrow of the bone before we realize we're bleeding! As per your usual, an emotionally wretching piece flowed from your pen. Superb job! <smile>

Vixxx

that one hit me hard!

It's amazing how much

beauty can come from

so much pain.

Great work,

thanks.

~ J

is the best...not that the others sucked but the sheer symplicity captures the bigger picture.

I didn't have the heart to bomb it...it's too good.

I'll wait to bomb your next story before the other trolls do.

...make for such beauty? Because we have to get this out of us before it eats our hearts to dwindled nubs that fetally quiver when touched...pity those who can't let it out. I do.

Your poetry is like a hand that reaches in and grabs at my inner being. You words always touch me. Great job, Imp

~Honey