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by NovemberBaby

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maineman4umaineman4uabout 14 years ago
Painful.

Again, NovemberBaby, expressive and emotional. Maybe when on bended-knee she is not defeated, but rather, unburdening herself.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
On bended knee

The poem is about a woman with bulemia at least partially. So "on bended knee" and then "porcelain..shiny and clean" is symbolizing purging as well as the feeling of defeat. Dark and yet beautiful. Seems out of place on this amateur site, no?

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