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erectus123erectus123almost 11 years agoAuthor
the final line " filled with grace" somehow has moved (i assume an error on my part)

should follow and read.....

"I imagine how she must look today

still tall

filled with grace

a little heavier in her baby face"

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 11 years ago
Sex is all in ze mind ---

So does'nt really matter whether ze significant Other is Gal , Boy or Transexual ......whatever floats your boat , 'rectus !! Happy Writin' bro .

tazz317tazz317almost 11 years ago
EVENTS PROVOKE THOUGHTS

and hidden feelings are invoked. TK U MLJ LV NV

todski28todski28almost 11 years ago
I still

Love the way your stories flow. In writing a bit of rhyme myself I know how difficult it is to make it tie together with out having jerky lines and strange phrases, they happen so rarely in your pieces that I just enjoy them so much.

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