All Comments on 'Fall's Ways'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Small bit stanzas, like falling leaves

tickle and wonder ~

will there be a "Winter's Ways?"

sacksackover 18 years ago
nice imagery...

The last two lines seem a bit redundant. Consider replacing them with just "as winter enters".

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