All Comments on 'Fantasies'

I liked this poem...it's familiar ryming caught my eye as IF I had written it myself, loved it.

Especially the ending. The rhymes were wonderful but if there was a little more punctuation, this would surely reach that 100%- for me. Something to think about. Look forward to reading more of your work.

No harm meant. This was indeed excellent :-)

Can I please rock my cock between those breasts of yours? I doubt, though, if I could last out until the end of the poem if I did so. Loved it. Love ALL your poems.