by Willow Rain
Perhaps I read these in the wrong order-- is this the first chapter?
Wonderful images again, but you belabor some points-- tell this same story in half the words (assuming the right half!) and you will have an excellent poem.
and an interesting read. Intriguing story. The poem could have ended with "to layers of emotion I can only guess at." Though, I did enjoy it all. Thank you for giving me something different to read. :)