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by demure101

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
I;m begiining to admire Ash's powers of observation

and of the songs we sing

while alone, resonant

of whale bone

as in corset

5ed

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
Demure , have you been travellin' lately

: this foghorn is about a ship , Endless Flight s on a plane & your third poem is about a train ! 5-ed.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerabout 11 years ago

Echos of Emily Dickenson, or maybe her ghost.

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
I liked this

caused a few question in my mind

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