All Comments on 'Father Keyboard'

at its most direct? not a bad save at the end. A 5, barely, suffers from too little more thought, too much I mush.

it is in the nature of the confessional, when reciting one's sins to the priest, to list them starting with 'I'...

i like the take on, the confessing through the keyboard. does it bring absolution, or doesn't the narrator care for that?

what penance, what scourge? the laying open of a soul to scorn of the e-world?

Many poets find themselves confessing in each and every poem. My criticism would be, you're confessing everything but your actual sins.

-WilliamButlerYeats