All Comments on 'Feast'

wow, my feast never looked like that? hehehe nice write ...

Raised my hackles (whatever they are)! I hope i don't run into that creature.

nicely with me:

Cryptic, evil lingering.

Shadows dancing,

through the wood.

Feel of goose-bumps

rippling along flesh.

*****

the rest to me equally great, but i'm licking them words above.......don

this makes my stomach growl, girl.

niice.

if I have to read another one of ur poor 'attempts' at poetry I will scream! The only scary thing about this is that you call yourself a poet! Anyone can string aload of words together but it takes talent to make it work - and you girl aint got no talent!

Give it up already!

A wicked little meal

Of the most satisfying kind...