All Comments on 'February's Fear'

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CeliaisAlienaCeliaisAlienaalmost 13 years ago
Hangin' with my raindrops!

Tense and tremulous, huddling somewhere between Wordsworthian and erotic. Even with the speaker's assurances, it fills me with a chilly resolution not to fall, so lovely and piteous are the drops, in their few moments of sky-huddling perfection!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Applause

Just as captivating as the precious raindrops during April showers.

Sincerely,

Jes_da_man

PoetGuyPoetGuyabout 13 years ago
Poet Guy has read this several times

and quite likes it, though he isn't quite sure what the "her" refers to. He isn't sure it matters if he does, though. "[W]ind whisper" verges on cliche, at least to Poet Guy's ear, but he enjoyed this poem considerably, especially because of its slight sense of mystery.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago
Cold.....

...beauty. Very evocotive. Micro poetry at its best.

Tess

fridayamfridayamabout 13 years ago
Gorgeous imagery

condensing into those raindrops. TY

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