All Comments on 'Feeding'

how complicated that simple act can be.

and what goes through the mind.

I like this alot

the mind does one thing while the body does another.

very nice

thank you

Quite unusual,

definitely not your normal poem.

More like a well written scene in an erotic story.

Are you going to expand it?

But then thats what makes poetry interesting in the first place. But there is a raw sensuality about this that I liked. Enjoyed...

I remain, Thesandman

just on the edge of explicit, causing the reader to fill in the blanks - very well done

Loved this. I feel like you plucked the thoughts from my mind and wrapped them in wonderful words like a gift to me. Thank you!