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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
fire

sizzling erotic poetry

lobomaolobomaoabout 18 years ago
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o me o me o my

you sizzle shape and burn

slip slide like oil on slopey curves

yet your stop tip words

too too literal like little teeth

dragged on the flesh

where a tongue could glide

but still still I like the ride.

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