by tungtied2u
This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.
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this is perfect
no sentiment
just what the coldness
hard truth
facts
well done
ok, loved it, you waste not a single word, and hit us hard with truth, which happens to be so rare these days. keep'em comin' ;)
then the tears.
(thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)
Because the subject matter gives me nightmares, and I don't want to do the homework! Sharp and succinct!