All Comments on 'First Fuck'

Very sexy stuff here Jenn, I love the images you use to really put me in that moment, very erotic and sexy as hell!!

wow, great write JC

wow, great write JC

you burned my eyes out ;)

does the second come next.......*LOL*. captured nicely......don

I wish my first fumble was accompanied with champagne! LOL

Hot as always.

b'brig

You paint a great picture with words. Good job!

roughhands pulling my legs apart.....arms lifting them over my head....legs stiff, unused to it....cold feeling of liquid on my man cunt....excruciating pain....huge cock thrsting...warmth in my loins....hot cum filling me....again...often...now...everyone, please.

makes me wanna regain my virginity and do it all over again but like that this time.

Really nice.

***Keep Smiling***

I've been away, and now I am back you were the first author I looked up to find what you have submitted wilst I have been away. Congrats! Terrific stuff. I'm hard as soon I start to read ANY of your works - this one especially!

nice erotic poem!

~Honey

You captured the moment so vividly. I'm thinking the first time with the one you've dreamed of for so long more than the 'first' time.Nice memories..Thanks!

it was quick, to the point, descriptive, yet no overkill, excellent work

The first time's so special,

Tho ~hellbaby~'s thoughts are better

than the first thing I thought

of the back of the trusty old Chevy