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All Comments on 'First Kiss'

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Miss OatlashMiss Oatlashover 19 years ago
Glad

you still have your sense of passion despite adversity. :) Great read. Exhaling slowly...

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
It felt like a little e.e.cummings...

...until the fifth verse. Any possibility of maintaining that three line format of short lines?

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