by LesseloovesPeter
I agree that that mosquito theme raises this poem above the crowd. Nicely done.
greatly
the real trick is in edit
and when not to write
you will master that. i see it already beginning
I am humbled by y'alls high opinion of my writing. It's a gift, 10000 hours be damned, I was born with it. Words just come out. I can't stop them. It's nice to have them appreciated, you guys have no idea.
Gold standard ISO 2001 validation !!! Need i comment further ??
what saves potentially fatal material (all material is potentially fatal) are the asides
the mosquitoes
and that is a damn good ending
I applaud your commenting on others material
high 5
You captured it so vividly. Just spent 10 minutes trying to separate what I think it was like and and what was the actual. You hit embarassingly close to the mark. Lucky you didn't have poison ivy. Sigh