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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
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this poem was mentioned on the new poem reviews

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
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"As our bodies finally mesh

Flesh to perfect flesh"

loved the last line! :)

great job as always!

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