All Comments on 'fixation'

reading this poem of yours. Loved seeing the world through this speakers eyes.

p.s your poem has been mentioned in today's reviews

That's the stuff... reminds me of Rumblefish.

"California’s like a beautiful, wild girl on heroin... who's high as a kite, thinkin' she's on top of the world, not knowing she's dying even if you show her the marks."

Hard gritty edge in looking at the world through her dying eyes.

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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